I've just given it a quick 'glance', and it's not bad at all, actually. I mean, yeah, it could be 'better', but I think that it's 'justified', since it's what you could 'expect' from the first page of a comic: 'shortness', 'simplicity'... overall, nothing 'too-complicated', asides from the 'presentation' of the 'protagonist/main-character' of the series.
I've to be honest, though. I'm not 'too-intrigued' to see how it continues... but hey, still, I've to admit that it has 'caught' my attention enough to be 'slightly-interested', so yeah. I'm gonna give it an opportunity. Let's see what the next part has to offer.
Gekkotsuki
I've just given it a quick 'glance', and it's not bad at all, actually. I mean, yeah, it could be 'better', but I think that it's 'justified', since it's what you could 'expect' from the first page of a comic: 'shortness', 'simplicity'... overall, nothing 'too-complicated', asides from the 'presentation' of the 'protagonist/main-character' of the series.
I've to be honest, though. I'm not 'too-intrigued' to see how it continues... but hey, still, I've to admit that it has 'caught' my attention enough to be 'slightly-interested', so yeah. I'm gonna give it an opportunity. Let's see what the next part has to offer.
ArtCoreProject
yep i'm kind of new to the whole comic thing and i don't use to draw background, i kept it simple :)